Hello everyone, dear friends. At the beginning of summer I wanted to make my own machinima, but I didn’t have enough time. After several months, I finally found a free minute and started working. If I weren’t such a lazy person, it could have been finished in a few days, but it took me several weeks. And finally I’m done.
I hope you like it)
I would also not refuse adequate criticism, because this is my first, trial work in this area.
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If it’s really the first, then cool! But if you are just starting to do this, ditch Harris and learn SFM. Now even a high-quality machinima with processing in AE will not surprise anyone after the release of SFM. But in any case, good luck and creative success!
In general, it’s not bad https://neonfortunecasino.co.uk/login/ for the first, but the quality of work is not enough: The camera jumps like hell, the framing of the shots is also rather weak. The frame rate, by the way, is also bad. The premise is simple, but good nonetheless.
IMHO, in the next machinima you should pay attention to the integrity of the plot, otherwise you will somehow fall out of what is happening.
Regarding the shooting, I’ll say that the cop could just get scared and start shooting out of fear (it could be something to do with nerves), but the lack of emotion on his face during the shooting and “fright” (if it was him, of course) is not good.
um… you shot down a man, and he took it and resurrected, and even comes at you with a pistol, with a scary face in the dark… what would you do?
In general, things are bad with animation at Harris. When I tried to do something through HAT (I think that was the name of the tool), the game gave out 5 fps… In SFM everything seems to be simpler, but again, you need good hardware, and I’m learning, and not on a budget either: D, so there is a desire, but there is no opportunity.
Throughout the video, events changed somehow too abruptly, if you don’t pay attention to this, then everything is ok.
The characters should be voiced when one person knocks another down, I doubt that the first one would simply remain silent.