There is a game in the world called mutant and in the community there was a competition for the best story on the topic of the game. I wrote a story like this and got 2nd place. This is my community.mail.ru/community/mutantgame there is my story.
So I decided to share it with you. Immediately I say punctuation marks with them I am not at odds. And to understand something you need to play the game. Well started!
There is little food left, even less ammunition. With 1 pistol I can’t get through an army of mutants to the base. I met a hunter yesterday, he said that the base is about 3 kilometers from here, and that there is a helicopter there, and it transports to an island where there are no mutants. If only it were true. But I won’t know until I try to get to the base. I can’t get there across the field, there are a lot of mutants, and the bandits don’t sleep. Maybe, although no, it’s dangerous, but there’s no other choice, you’ll have to go through the factory, and then through the city. It’s a half-kilometer detour, but there’s a chance. The factory was filled with bipeds, if I pass the factory unnoticed then it will be good, it’s not so difficult to walk around the city. And if not? If they notice me, I won’t be able to fight them off with 60 rounds on a machine gun, and if that thing with tentacles is there… That’s it, it’s decided, I’m going there.
Here it is, the plant, it stands in the middle of the steppes and the city. I thought so, from here you can clearly see the steppes, there are a lot of mutants there. But who knows what is happening at the plant now?. Having overcome trembling knees, I went.
So far everything is normal, there are no horned bastards in sight, but what the hell. I thought so, here they are and there are many of them. Perhaps I can walk past them behind these pipes. Part of the ceiling was missing and this made it easy to see where to go. And thank God t.To. There are radioactive puddles everywhere, and you’ll soon become a mutant. And so I passed this hall, all I had to do was go through that small room and exit through that corridor. I entered the room, I was about to go and then I heard growls, I turned around and saw that 2 of these creatures were looking at me. My reaction was swift, I pulled out a machine gun and shot them.
The shot was heard throughout the entire plant, and 10 of these creatures were already running towards me. I ran to the exit, simultaneously shooting radioactive evil spirits. my heart was beating with terrible force, I thought it was going to jump out of my chest. And then I felt such a strong blow, this biped stood in the aisle and hit me. The path from the factory is closed, I have to run up the stairs, but it hurts so much, I think it’s an abscess, no, I don’t care about that, I have to run. Then I noticed that this creature knocked out my machine gun, I don’t have time to go back for it, which is a pity.
I climbed to the second floor, noticed an emergency exit and then something grabbed my leg and hit me against the wall with such force. I was lost for a second, it hurt, but my worst fears were confirmed, this creature with tentacles attacked me. And then his tentacle grabbed my neck and threw me out the window, but fortunately I grabbed onto it and didn’t fly out of the factory, on the contrary, I’m inside again, next to this creature. And again they grabbed me around the leg, this time right into the mouth of the mutant. Raging pulse, fear, made me forget about the gun. So I’m trying to get him, come on! Oh no he’s stuck in the holster! Come on, darling, get out, eat! He almost reached me to his mouth and then I started shooting, in the eyes, mouth, tentacle. So he loosened his grip and I got out. It hurts… I don’t care, I have to run. I’m running straight to the window, I don’t care if I crash, the mutants won’t get anything from me.
Window, sound of breaking glass, whistle, pain. I fell all over the ground, but still alive. Now I see the city, and behind it is the base, there’s not much left. BUT I have to run, there’s a house over there, I’ll hide in it. I got up and ran through the pain. Running into the house, I locked myself, the door, by the way, is strong – made of metal. This is probably someone’s hideout, but judging by the details, no one has lived here for a long time. I lay down on the bed and fell asleep, I don’t care about the mutants outside the door, I don’t care about everything, I’m tired.
Waking up a couple of hours later, I decided to look around the room. Here I found a shotgun, cartridges for it, camouflage and, lo and behold, a couple of first aid kits, a blue implant for reaction and a green implant for health, upgrading the shotgun to 15% rate of fire and 200 initial ammo. It was not a poor man who lived here, all this is worth a lot. Taking all this and taking the first aid kit, I went into the city.
After walking around the city for a couple of hours, shooting a dozen mutants in the process, I reached the city center, from here it’s a stone’s throw from the base. Having reached the square, I heard voices, bent down and crawled. Oh no, these are bandits: 1 mercenary and 1 half-mutant, they apparently strayed from the canvas. Hmm, the mercenary claims that the half-mutant led them to the wrong place. They got angry at each other. I guess I’ll sing. your mother! This little creature bit me, nasty green bugs, but I think I said it very loudly.To. the mercenary shouted, “Kill him!”!». The half-breed began to burn with a flamethrower, I hid from him, but the mercenary did not lose heart and continued to shoot. I don’t support it either, but he has strong armor, and he almost pierced mine. Then his friend appeared, I hit him with the butt, he didn’t give a fuck, then I started shooting at him, pierced his shell, but he set me on fire, then the mercenary was already shooting. Aw… that hurts, he shot me in the shoulder. The half-breed threw me away from him and shouts “I’ll finish him off myself” and comes at me. I remembered a bottle of radioactive water (which I collect for my business) and threw it at him. Yes, I knew it, he transformed into a mutant and now he doesn’t give a fuck who’s his and who’s a stranger. And then he ran, jumped, I managed to jump away and he fell on his friend. Now quickly get into their car, let’s start it! She started up so well, and with all her might she drove into this bastard. Victory! That’s it, I went to the base. I got there without any difficulty. They let me in, checked whether I was a mutant or not, treated me, then the main cyborg came up to me and asked, “Would you like to go to the island, warrior?”? I think you’ve served your time.“I said, “Of course, sir.”. And here I am in front of the helicopter, ready to fly. I have already stepped on him with one foot and have already. "ALERT ALARM ALARM, BASE UNDER ATTACK BY MUTANTS". I ran to the wall, climbed up it and saw that thousands of mutants were storming the base. The commander came up to me, handed me a plasma launcher and said, “Be ready for battle, now the fun will begin.”. To be continued… probably
I didn’t finish the story for one reason, so let’s throw rotten vegetables, swear at it, in short, criticize.
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Author. Need constructive criticism? Get it (although it was already higher).
Your story is written dryly, and all attempts to show emotions look pathetic. Literacy suffers in places, there are many speech and punctuation errors. It is impossible to learn anything about the game itself from the text, except for the presence of some types of weapons, NOTHING is unclear about the enemies! If you want to share the game with others, then explain its essence: who are the enemies and who are the friends, a description of ways to spend time, why you think the game is good.
And yes, games with mail.ru do not shine with a wide variety of gameplay, just shit in different wrappers. You can only like them for the history of the world (apocalypse, ancient times, racing, etc.).d.).
Look, so that you don’t be stupid, https://lotusasiacasino.co.uk/withdrawal/ I’ll explain – on SG they DO NOT like stupid fan fiction based on unknown Donat shit games. Even if you wrote decently, it would hardly change anything.
Oh, yes, dude, these lines just stand out in your profile: “About me: I do reviews of old and new games. Anyone interested, write in a personal message. I will be glad if my review is read by someone from the SG team (I do reviews using Microsoft Office Word).
Geezhot, monsieur!
Besides the fact that the text itself is dry, clumsy and boring, there are also a lot of errors and typos. At least I should have put my rockyscript into Word first.
Bloo, games on VKontakte and in emails are complete crap. And such a low level that it’s disgusting to watch. That’s why this topic gets a downvote from me. Also, it deserves minuses for the crazy idea and lack of punctuation. How?! How could such a work take second place??!